Performance Critique: January 6a

A writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e0zCBWJE-SE

0m09s Don’t comment on the MC messing up the intro, especially if it’s a mic. (Unless it’s really funny.)

3m21s Don’t repeat “stay loyal” twice

4m28s Shake the hips a little more

4m55s Cut the genetic line

Overall: Weak response even for a mic. The dogs joke needs more rewriting.

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