Going last at a music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j_e30DwloR8
6m56s Don’t say “it’s not a real thing”
8m29s Change “know what I’m talking about” to “know what I mean” because I said the former ten seconds ago
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QRz5IdxUkgo
0m52s Change the lines after “my grandma”
1m49s Change “impatient” to “tired of waiting”
Overall: Good for six people being there. I got consistent (but light) laughs throughout.
