An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nauqYa7bXl0
1m14s More emphasis on “that’s”
1m22s Stop treating “it’s really hard to raise a, dog” as a punchline
1m39s End sentence at “in a basement” no need for “for a couple of hours”
3m19s Better delivery on “that’s totally understandable”
3m31s It should be “comedian” not “cop”
4m57s End the joke on “grandma” or change the next twenty seconds
6m14s Try moving my whole arm and not bending at the elbow
Overall: Reworking some stuff, some of it needs work, a lot of it needs cutting.
