Performance Critique: January 30a

Hosting the Sunday writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y7TqHIzZq6A

0m19s Stare out into the audience while moving the mic stand

1m37s Change to “she also complained”

2m49s Say the line harder

3m08s Say “I’m an organ donor. Just yesterday I donated…”

3m38s Rephrase to “You’d be surprised how often Jesus would use…”

4m01s Rephrase to “The only place I kill at is…”

4m48s Say the cat line towards the start of the bit

Overall: A lot of the newer jokes are almost there, they just need some rephrasing

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