The 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/_u21tvRAtkM
3m05s Good to start laughing on “didn’t make it” makes it less harsh
3m15s Great improvised bit
3m57s Nice call back to improvised stuff
5m26s Good job “reacting” to the one audible “hmm”
7m48s Not a bad line to put in, “now that we’re all friends, let’s do some therapy”
10m07s More emphasis on “real”
10m56s Stepped on the laugh a little, but I was trying to finish before all the checks get dropped
Overall: Great set. My material hit really strong and I improvised and played with the crowd. The birthday stuff at the end was a little too heavy/sad at times, I should play with way to make it funnier and less sad.
