An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RWN0RAMF_lY
1m35s Try “she also complained” instead
4m30s Pause for an extra two seconds before puppies, so it’s more random
5m38s Rewrite or cut the survivor joke
Overall: Standard open mic.
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i feel like the persona could be better if he had a little more fun, ala the Joker. Not a drastic deviation, but if the character felt a little more like he got a kick out of shocking and killing.