Performance Critique: January 24b

Another mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KxMwBRVG6ss

2m51s Get rid of the lines after “pliers”

4m15s A little too long in silence

4m40s Don’t break character

5m25s Add “until the lie detector”

6m19s Say it angrier

Overall: Working out a new persona, I need to learn to never break character.

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