An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S9apAJ4U9mk
0m27s No need for “pigtails”
1m04s Don’t break into a smile
1m52s Cut this tag
2m04s And this one
3m01s Unnecessary line, better to say “You can be next”
3m40s Too much info, leave it after “pliers”
5m15s Get rid of the whole choice thing
5m40s Say that angrier
6m24s Get rid of the word “but”
7m24s Get rid of “again”
Overall: Standard mic response. I’m working out new tags and a new persona.
