Performance Critique: January 23a

A Sunday night show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zY5LTKZlJrY

0m18s One of the “girls” was a guy with long hair, whoops

3m09s Cut “she’s quite the seamstress”

3m22s Say “it won’t be” in a more singing way

4m35s Cut the netflix callback

6m11s Cut the model part of the dog bit

Overall: I opened with dark material and didn’t lose the crowd. I need to hone and rewrite material for this persona.

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