Performance Critique: January 15b

Friday Night Show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vbIMqG_ZTOE

0m18s I left the MC’s joke on here on purpose because I played off it

0m47s Instead of “he just” say “I just”

3m04s I should’ve also added “that was cute” as it was a couple of dudes

4m00s Don’t look down when changing characters

5m55s Go into the wife’s laugh more and either ask or talk about it, I need to work on making comments in groups of three instead of one off remarks

7m15s Change the wording to “could’ve spiced things up”

7m52s Look up at the audience higher

8m48s I need to add “Let’s just say that” before “Igor liked last year”

9m16s The shoes joke isn’t clear yet

Overall: This was an okay set, but not great. Laughs were consistent but not huge and I didn’t follow through on my crowd comments as much as I should. I really need to get in the habit of when I remark on something going on, to make three remarks on it instead of just one.

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