Performance Critique: February 8a

Doing a regular set on my Astoria show for about 8 people

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kPjWrWEMFqk

0m35s Say the OJ line before anything else if someone says something before I start

4m58s This happens often with this character, where some people won’t make eye contact, decent idea to call it out. Maybe, “Why won’t you look at me? Don’t you think I’m attractive?”

8m59s Say “do not” instead of “don’t”

Overall: Weak showing. A couple of audience members enjoyed the character and rest hated it.

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