Going last at a music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0SmY5VuRP6o
0m34s Change “should get the chance” to “deserves the chance”
0m48s This joke isn’t good to open with
2m00s Pause for a half second before “uncomfortable”
5m43s I should use this line more often
6m08s I wish I got that guy falling on camera
8m08s No need for “I thank you”
9m52s Don’t use the word “jokes” say “references”
Overall: Second five minutes went better than my first five minutes.
