Performance Critique: February 23b

Going last on a bar show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B6He3U6A9dQ

1m39s Say “inflation” in a bit more of a throwaway fashion

3m27s Adding “I felt bad” might help the surprise of the punch line

6m40s It’s nice when an improvised line from a previous night works as material the next night

8m23s The “you’d never date” line should be in my normal voice

10m42s The start of the sentence should be different from “if you don’t laugh” cause I said that earlier, maybe “if you keep staring at me”

Overall: Solid set, and the voice went in and out more or less smoothly.

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