A 9pm show for 10 or so audience members
httpv://youtu.be/4zOlINfDmNA
1m07s Cut this part
1m30s Pause after “no”
2m59s Pause for an extra half second after “women”
3m18s Better but I can milk the kissy face for even longer
4m48s Do air quotes on “emergency”
6m37s Make this two sentences instead of one run on thought
7m43s More emphasis on “allergic”
9m07s Horrible forced crowd work, figure out a better interaction to set it up
9m58s Hit “bring it” harder
Overall: Okay for a small crowd but plenty of room for improvement
