Performance Critique: February 21b

A 10pm show for 12-15 people

httpv://youtu.be/rzq6DYd1YGc

0m12s Use “told” instead of “mentioned”

0m37s Seem a little happier on the lines

1m14s Find a better delivery for this line

3m22s Do the kissy face for longer than is comfortable

3m45s This is the way to always delivery the truck stop / Denny’s line

4m25s Say “brunch” before “shoe shopping”

6m11s Step forward more on the punch line

Overall: Good for a small crowd with consistent laughs.

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