Going up 2 hours into the 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/Dz_F4moKqPA
0m17s Great improvised line for when I go up late in a show, make sure to reuse this
0m34s Get the setup clearer
1m22s No need to comment on the intelligence
1m41s Make the 2 to 3 to 2 finger motion clearer and without hand movement
2m03s Try “no, never, go do your homework” without pausing
3m57s Consider saying cycle before the hand grab motion
4m03s Commit to the kissy face for three seconds instead of one second
5m09s Consider cutting the Notebook line, laughs aren’t that strong
5m47s Change delivery when giving the scenario
6m10s Cut the range and bars lines
7m10s Smile and look at the crowd while waiting for the MC to return
Overall: Solid set with consistent laughs, could still use adjustments
