Performance Critique: February 1

A 10pm show for 5 or 6 people

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H1WpxwwTIvk

0m40s Say “I’m not sure why you’re laughing” instead of “don’t laugh”

4m58s I improvised that line, and it’s going into the act

6m48s This part feels forced. I need to find a different way to do this material.

8m21s Say that line angrier

9m06s Make these last few sentences clearer

Overall: Really good first six minutes. I need to figure out a better way to work in the Russian mom material while doing the new persona.

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