The 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/_JmRSUgzRZ0
0m16s Face scratch is too subtle
0m20s Hit “lie” harder
2m25s Name a specific airline
2m50s Weird transition, joke doesn’t fit there
3m17s I could probably tighten this to one instead of three sentence, “I teach convicts how to do comedy.”
3m49s Be cognizant of the shake sound
4m39s Figure out the free agent line or cut it out
4m55s Cut the Newt Gingrich clause, it’s clever not funny
5m18s Cut or reword “team player”
7m03s Say “our first date” instead of “the first date”
7m17s Mom should smile on the first line
8m30s Don’t need the hammy line
8m39s Heavier sarcasm on the “somebody went to Yale” line
8m58s Hand motion should keep going in the same direction until community college”
10m01s If they laugh on the set up, pause before answering the question
10m51s Just have him point instead of using a fork
11m09s Work on getting a smoother motion for that whole grandpa thing
12m13s Tap hip instead of mic for the clap, or wave out to the audience
12m57s I don’t need to go back into the Ben voice
13m04s It should be “have a safe night”
Overall: Mediocre to average set. Got some decent laughs but not that much momentum and I didn’t end as strong as I wanted.
