Going last at a music and comedy mic
httpv://youtu.be/3uMkuQSqeVc
0m27s If doing the face scratch, do it twice
1m52s This punch line isn’t a punch line, if getting rid of the threat, think of something funny
2m31s Looks like the bear line might work
3m09s Needs a stronger line for my perspective of scary
4m30s This whole part after Denny’s needs reconsideration/rewriting
5m45s Probably not worth listing different brands
6m39s I let the audiences lack of energy effect my energy by this point, try keeping a higher energy especially when it’s dragging
8m13s Work on the mannerisms more, so he’s always pointing the knife on “you”
8m33s Make the side turn more pronounced
8m54s Don’t go up on “clown”
9m28s The birthday song is better when mom smiles
Overall: Weak set. I did a lot of rewrites and was thinking about them more than about the actual performance and my energy dipped.
