Opening on a 2pm show for a light crowd
httpv://youtu.be/rACulXmRaE0
2m08s No need for the “thanks”
3m20s Try to make “one year deal” a punch line
4m12s If “The Notebook” gets a big laugh, I might want to drop “that’s like a hat trick”
4m37s Smile more during this bit
5m30s Switch mic to the other hand before “with my mom”
6m42s Cut the “how cold are you now” line
Overall: This sounded better than I remember it going. Consistent but not light laughs for most of it.