The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RvxRXisAfN8
0m14s Put on the glove slower
1m13s Give “that could be kinda fun” a girl voice
1m36s Sound slightly more playful
2m26s I forgot to do the whole “I remember her” part of the joke, and that part takes the character so over the line that it becomes obvious it’s a character
4m36s Pause for an extra half second after “if you lock your kid in the basement”
Overall: I bombed. The first couple of jokes didn’t hit and then I got the order of the rest of my jokes jumbled which didn’t help as this character needs to setup certain thing towards the start of the act.
