An afternoon open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dZqz7DH9rBo
1m54s Weird how that line took an extra two seconds to get a laugh
2m15s Say it a little more excited
3m01s Change it to “so you don’t get along with your father?”
3m12s Cut the cabin location line
3m52s The line should be “about a slim, supple brunette getting to know the real you”
4m44s Cut the “all of August” tag
5m18s I should already have the mic in my other hand
Overall: Good for an open mic, a couple of the newer jokes need words adjustments.
