Performance Critique: February 10c

Late night at the music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=00ApYJ52RrI

5m55s I need to find a way to hide where this is going, maybe just say it faster

6m22s Cut “some people are so self centered”

8m37s Try adding in, “weirdo”

9m48s The laugh stop is really effective

10m38s If “chance to beg” gets a big laugh, I shouldn’t do the “for the sweet release of death” tag as there’s too long of a pause

17m36s That random flower line doesn’t make sense here, it should be after I don’t get a laugh

Overall: Great set. This is the best the crazy persona has done and the longest set I’ve done without breaking character.

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