Performance Critique: February 28

The Sunday Writer’s Mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eVOOVH-KmVM

0m43s Try saying I don’t have health insurance before saying the vet line

1m27s The comic started talking so I went into a mini rant about his material, probably shouldn’t do that

2m58s This joke seems better when the character is whispering and conspiratorial

3m49s This is a new joke, the first part worked better than the next two

Overall: I did mostly new jokes and parts of each of the new jokes worked which doesn’t always happen. Of course, other parts need rewriting. Also, the pot buddy joke seems to be more effective when the pot friend is a distinct character.

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