The Saturday night show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LfleDCu2PwQ
0m34s Don’t do the pause after “I recently broke up with my girlfriend” anymore
3m43s Good improvised call out
5m17s Don’t do the motion until after I’m done with “could’ve spiced things up”
7m02s First time I’m doing this joke for a real audience
7m15s Get rid of “just a number” and “variety” lines
7m36s Good job calling out the situation
Overall: Solid set. I was getting consistent laughs throughout and had a four or five huge laughs. It’s time to start focusing on getting consistently huge laughs. Also, the shoes joke that I’ve been working on for a few months finally came out and the first three parts of it worked well, the last three parts could be cut or get tweaked.
