Performance Critique: February 14

The Sunday writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PfgomgaLE5I

1m29s This was funnier when I did it in an improv monologue

2m11s This needs a rewrite

3m11s Grammar jokes are not my friend

Overall: The first minute was jokes I’d been working on and they worked, the next three and a half minutes were half baked jokes, and none of them will be kept in their current form.

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