Me hosting the writers mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qjhYQYJpJGk
0m27s Slow down the hand motions and pause longer between them
1m45s The shoe joke worked better with this premise
3m33s I should have the word “morning after” during one of the last two times I say “pill”
4m06s No need for “just proving a point”, just make a big face like “what the hell?” and hold it while waiting for the crowd to catch up
Overall: My newer jokes are progressing but still need more work
