An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GHDqt0F7184
0m43s Add in “I sleep with women above 20”
1m52s Change “while” to “and”
3m37s Change “come on in” to “enjoy your trip”
3m55s Smile while doing this joke
Overall: Decent for a mic. I did three new jokes at the start, one of which, the “you don’t live too far” has decent potential.
