Closing out my Astoria show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PUqyMbQMsFU
0m22s Have the word “floor” in that sentence
1m12s Don’t lean back on a punch line
1m38s Ask a little more about the birthday instead of just acknowledging it without any follow up
2m31s Stay in character when getting the comics to quiet down, and go into it for more than a one liner
3m55s Reword so “Eddie Murphy” is last
5m52s Try adding “I’m not pandering to you people”
7m22s Say all of this in my head and just go into the next joke
8m27s Deliver all of the nobel prize stuff more naturally, it feels forced and acted
9m18s I should’ve said “right, birthday boy?”
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LPFsWvxeeYQ
1m47s Throw in a “how do you think I felt?” before the survivor song
Overall: Lousy. I had a couple of big laughs but it was mostly weak. I should’ve done more crowd work since material wasn’t really working.
