Performance Critique: December 5

Hosting the Sunday writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qev6Fm4HRjo

0m29s Use the word “above” not “over”

0m45s Cut the dorm wall studying lines

1m47s Reword the act out

2m02s Change “mother’s” to “mom’s”

3m03s It should be “pro Arab” not “pro Palestine”

4m18s Say the line without stuttering

Overall: Eh. I worked two brand new jokes at the start, they’ll have potential once I memorize them.

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