The 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/gh6Tr0TpkBQ
0m27s Take a slight pause after “junkie”
1m17s Nice little improvised line
2m35s The kid was too young to point at, find someone who looks 25 or over
3m08s It should be “King’s Palace”
3m27s Take a slight pause before “phone charger”
6m33s Not sure if I need “full contact sport”
6m53s Make it two hundred thousand instead of twenty
7m03s I heard talking but shouldn’t have addressed it as it wasn’t that loud
7m30s Not even sure what he said
8m28s Decent job working my way back into the material
8m40s Should be smiling more during this part
9m46s I missed the line of “maybe I’ll get married at 41 when I should be dead anyway”
10m00s Shouldn’t have gone into that bit after the interruption
10m21s Could’ve asked if she had to see any family
10m49s Checks are dropping
11m13s Make a sentence, and I forgot to do the grandpa criticizing me part
11m52s Don’t say dip twice in a row
11m56s Don’t use the word “sad” let them figure it out
13m53s Suicide then murder should be the setup
Overall: It went a lot better than I remembered it going, and the interaction with the heckler seemed smoother than I remembered it going. I should’ve still been even gentler on the first response. Set got weaker at the end due to checks dropping.
