The 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/2UmFGwm7NbM
0m17s Tighten those first two sentences
0m32s Pause before “bullshit”
1m49s Say the line smoother
2m28s Make the second one “Halo” or “call of duty” instead of repeating Madden
2m54s Hit the line stronger without jumbling words
3m33s Pause after “12th century” as that seems to the laugh line
5m24s Nice job being in the room and noticing that
6m48s Add “it’s just a hunch” or “I’d actually guess Denny’s”
7m09s Six pack is funnier than twenty four pack
7m47s It should be “and you’re horny” not “or you’re horny”
9m15s Emphasize “AND”
Overall: Great set. I did a lot of new and newer material and it went over really well. I just gotta smooth out my words in a few places.
