A bar show for 12-14 people
httpv://youtu.be/9Cw8a-zwy8Y
5m51s “Shot at redemption” would be better wording
6m34s I can add “the rest of us are fucked”
7m35s Follow my hand with my eyes
8m07s Might make sense to change my hand posture to hand on hips first before calling them out, to sell being upset more
8m38s There’s a reason I usually end the act out after “forever, and ever”
11m30s It should be “used a payphone” instead of “prepay”
Overall: Decent set.
