Performance Critique: December 21b

Going last at a music and comedy mic

httpv://youtu.be/iUZAJOyymBQ

0m31s Put the emphasis back on “inside”

1m50s Pause for half a second before “state”

3m02s Don’t put finger down between those two lines

5m32s Funny improvised concept with “aspire”

8m37s Say “I was just as excited”

9m35s Cut the unconditional love line

Overall: Decent for last at a mic

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