Going up around 2am on a music and comedy mic
httpv://youtu.be/hvN87eWN2Sc
1m21s Change up his voice a bit more
2m21s Leave it as “you do” no need to rephrase to “you do”
3m30s Funny improvised line about the sick day, but should probably cut or rework most of this bit
4m39s Make this a conversation with an actual person
4m44s Give the immigrants an accent
6m02s It actually did completely miss and needs a rewrite
8m01s Try yawning on the “you’re so tired” line
8m53s I could’ve improvised a “she wants me to end this too” line based on the material I was doing
9m05s Change “modern art” to “your masterpiece”
11m04s Cut out the word “kitchen”
Overall: The two newer jokes were kinda weak but the Blade bit at the end went well.
