Performance Critique: December 1b

A music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w_S-rkZPmxA

2m42s Don’t workshop while doing the joke or say how it did well before

3m42s Cut the synagogue question

4m27s Cut the whole America part

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=su7QCguc3yY

0m15s I need a clearer setup

Overall: My new jokes mostly missed but the “Is-ra-el” line is really coming along strong. The 7 minutes of new material I did here needs to be cut down to 2.5 minutes and then it’ll be funnier.

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