An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VfxD0lX4pAo
0m35s Try not dead panning these lines
1m32s Change “chanukah” to something else
2m18s Cut this whole “imagine if America did this” part, it’s too forced
4m35s This needs a stronger ending where the kid wins
6m12s The tags are funny but the setup is confusing and lacking
Overall: Working out new jokes at a mic, half of this stuff needs to be cut down.
