Performance Critique: December 19a

Hosting the Sunday writer’s mic

httpv://ww.youtube.com/watch?v=93QsiPY3fGQ

1m46s Do a much bigger smile before hitting that line

2m25s It’s not conversational to just go right into another joke, add an “oh man” or “I like you guys” or something

3m35s Cut the “clap if” part

4m10s Cut everything between “clap if” and here as well

Overall: Weak even for a mic. The first and last line of the New Years joke is good, the minute in the middle needs serious work.

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