Performance Critique: December 18

Going up though checks on an 8pm show

httpv://youtu.be/Tizx2TXE7eQ

1m29s Cut that line

2m21s I can add in “notice that doesn’t ring true for the Asians with the three majors”

3m33s Might be funny to specify the job

4m23s Pause after “so”

5m17s Punch up the parents talking, but it’s a funny idea

9m01s Slow down the “just because” to articulate each word

11m06s That’s the proper way of skipping past a weird “where are you from answer” and then going into my bit

14m56s Good job dealing with it, could’ve mentioned how “PhD” isn’t a real doctor, which was his question

16m12s Say “yeah, I was as excited as you” instead

17m07s Cut the unconditional love line

17m22s Sing it more and worse

Overall: Good for a check spot

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