Performance Critique: December 15a

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X31eZWZYHfk

3m01s The pause should be after “in”

3m23s Change “latchkey” to “neglect”

3m27s Say “the legos tripled” happier

3m59s Cut everything after “neuro divorce” until here

4m47s More emphasis on “If I REALLY like you”

Overall: Decent for a mic. Some parts need to be cut out.

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