Performance Critique: December 14

MCing my Tuesday show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9TyCnLSmNig

0m45s Make a joke sooner

2m30s I think this joke is funny but I’ve yet to find the delivery that will make it work

4m31s Rewrite or cut the proceeding joke

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1KsBYUcl4zE

1m51s Pause for another half second after “what’s more American than”

2m20s Wait for the clapping to stop before starting to talk, even if I’m playing off of what the previous comic said

2m55s Pause after “the opportunity to”

Overall: Average for a small show. I didn’t do any crowd work as the MC because I knew everyone in the audience, so it would’ve been weird.

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