Performance Critique: December 10

The 8pm show

httpv://youtu.be/zoahUHZWILY

0m32s Instead of “what we’re doing” go with “what we’re working with”

4m02s Don’t stumble on the words

4m25s Don’t move my eyes so quickly

5m17s Don’t move my eyes so quickly on the side to side

6m10s It didn’t seem random enough, maybe say “hi” to her first

6m54s I forgot the end to this joke

7m02s Don’t switch hands on the circle

7m18s This bit goes better if I remember to put the mic in the stand for it

9m48s The mouth line needs rework

9m58s So does the new affectionate line

10m06s Good improvised call back

Overall: Good at the start and end but the anti marriage stuff didn’t hit as well as usual.

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