Performance Critique: December 8

This is for a crowd of 5, 3 of whom were German

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EaCN-qS3MCY

0m29s When it’s a small crowd, I try to not start with a joke right away

2m12s Figures the Germans would laugh at the jdate joke

3m03s Good usage of Igor

3m09s Try “dignity drop” instead of “standards drop”

3m45s He brings up a valid point: I can’t do the sweaters joke when I’m in a sweater

4m20s Smile and laugh between doing 3 announcer bits

4m39s I need to laugh when I say this, not dead pan

5m14s Great response on the car starting line

6m50s I didn’t need to do the hand motion the last time, I should stop it as soon as I get a laugh after silence

7m45s Get to the legos quicker

8m20s The “gotch your nose” line needs to get funnier, and don’t explain it after

68m56s Don’t say “oh my god” for two responses in a row

9m11s Get a better punch line instead of “attend… high school”

Overall: Considering it was a very small crowd, I did well. I got some big laughs while other jokes missed. I need to fix the parental neglect and the neuroeconomics jokes. I also need to deliver the dog joke better.

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