Performance Critique: December 6

This is the Sunday writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q0LqU6bsB4I

0m35s Doing “Igor likes this” in a normal voice worked

0m48s Raise my hand for this line to make it obvious I’m the announcer voice

1m39s Deliver “stunning creature” in a more low key manner

1m45s If you can’t see, I licked my lips on that

2m06s I just thought of this one on the way over

2m21s Do this question in a different voice

2m43 I could get half the sentence and say “I only wanted to become a professor for the hour of stage time”

2m59s That was a great improvised line, I need to remember to use it

3m14s Cut 125 new heights ave

3m47s I delivered both lines wrong

4m18s Say the brain region quicker

4m28s I need a stronger ending instead of “attend high school” and “where do I get that alcohol test”

Overall: I did well for an open mic. I need to tighten some of the newer jokes, and the psychologist joke might need to disappear. Also, the “I guess community college doesn’t cost 40 grand” line is a keeper.

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