Performance Critique: December 5a

This is the 8:30 show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ImIFCSUx7LI

0m14s The MC was talking about a breakup that just happened

0m59s Make “Yes?” sound like more of a question

1m25s If you interrupt a comedian to ask “is it obvious I’m drunk”, you’re drunk

1m50s I haven’t done this joke in a while, after last night’s set, I decided to go a few days without doing Russian family material

2m24s Take a slight pause after “it’s a rent a pet”

2m44s This the new part of the dog joke

3m46s Instead of “got your nose” I should try “then her nose fell off”

4m20s They replied “17”

4m58s I should say “use protection” in a more downbeat way

5m22s I can’t get the delivery right on this joke

5m42s I should try “you wanna get with the hottest person there” instead of “hottest girl there” so it’s more inclusive

7m30s The premise and solution could be clearer for this joke

7m41s Good joke by the MC

Overall: I managed to more or less lose everyone but the three drunk girls. I should’ve done a little more crowd work with the other audience members, or at least looked in their direction more often. Even with that, the new version of the dogs joke is working pretty well.

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