The 8:30 show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gkST982r1tY
0m27s I shouldn’t do crowd work in the middle of my first joke, either start with crowd work, or get into it after the first joke, otherwise the flow gets ruined
1m21s A friend suggested I use this transition instead of “I like you guys”, it’s not working well
1m56s Sound more scared and concerned when saying it
2m52s Slight pause needed after “shit! No!”
3m14s I should’ve addressed the audience’s reaction with “what is this, a bible convention?”
3m20s He replied “I’m not”
3m58s I had an idea to keep doing the hand motion, and it worked
4m44s No need to address this, as I’m not doing that bad
5m21s Maybe I should be opening with this joke
6m43s Cut the new heights ave joke line
7m01s I’m playing with different call back endings, the original joke isn’t strong enough to end on
Overall: I did a little too much crowd work and it ruined the flow of my jokes. I was also doing well enough that there wasn’t a need to address the audience with “when you get drunker, you’ll laugh harder”, it was just one joke that didn’t hit well. The psychologist joke needs to be shortened if it’s gonna have a chance of working.
