A 9:30 show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C8Y2n7ATROQ
0m47s No need for that line
4m11s Drop my head quicker after that line
4m52s At least the new line hit decently well
6m28s From the tape, it doesn’t seem like anyone actually hates me at this set yet, no need to keep putting that thought in their head
8m20s Might be a decent line, “it’s okay to hate me AND laugh”
Overall: Mediocre and scatter brained. I think I told the audience they hated me on five or six different occasions, no need to mention that even if it’s true. On the bright side, two new punch lines seems to be working in a newer joke.
