Performance Critique: August 9a

A music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y3zJ_txmsN8

1m55s Lean forward while doing the pointing motion for more emphasis

3m59s Should’ve gone for a save line here. I paused thinking about it, but then just went to the next bit.

4m55s Pause for half a beat after “always greener”

6m07s Sound more confused and surprised that someone would object to the floor

6m44s Instead of “someone might buy” say “this guys gonna buy”

9m01s Say “expensive” instead of “difficult”

Overall: Pretty terrible set, even for a mic.

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