The 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O98nzhrTCkI
0m25s Fingers on my left hand should be wiggling more
2m25s The super soft whisper gets a bigger laugh
4m38s My face should be looking up higher
5m10s Seem happier
5m48s The thesaurus joke needs to be cut or reworded
7m28s The actually love line isn’t needed to go into this, do it after the twice the neglect joke instead
8m48s This joke is still noticeably weaker than the first five minutes
Overall: Ok but not great. I did too many newer jokes in a row in the middle and ruined momentum.
