Performance Critique: August 5c

The late night music and comedy mic with like 6 audience members

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z1xnuB6A-4w

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z1xnuB6A-4w

1m56s Great call back to improvised material

5m40s That’s a good line

6m10s Good adjustment to the glass breaking

7m12s I should’ve said, “this is like one of those ink blots”

8m22s That’s funny, I should repeat that

9m25s This is a fun set, I should be like this every time I’m on stage

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uK2HSLyVHTY

4m35s An interruption during a list destroys the punch line

5m17s Good job adjusting to that

5m37s Nice save

6m54s Rephrase to “little known fact, if you donate a corpse to science, they’ll pick up the body”

7m26s I can try to take it even further by adding, “can I borrow some lube?”

Part 3

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hAbg5IZy0tA

0m54s This is a 3am only joke

4m13s Funny

5m03s Good job milking this for literally 12 seconds, I should always milk it like this

6m02s And the bartender has started to play with my camera, bad zooms to ensue

8m05s I can start singing the Destiny’s Child “I’m a survivor” song…

Part 4

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1ayu1LyOWXw

1m08s Good line

4m16s This joke is a lot funnier with a zoom in on my eyes

Overall: I did 35 minutes without any notes and had a lot of fun. Sure I only did like 15 minutes of actual jokes in there, but I was really relaxed and everyone was laughing.  I need to learn how to copy my delivery in this venue to everywhere else I perform.

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